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[vonchong115]

Here's a story I started work on a long ----- time ago and after chapter one I just stopped for abgout a month. Well, now that theres some info on SA I want to continue it by Tommy somehow bumping into Carl Jhonson and taking him under his wing. I want to do that in this chapter (2, which isn't complete) but I'm still working out the best way to do:

http://hostultra.com.../anewbeginning/

tell me what you think I should do... or just tell me what you think of the story and if you think its' worth finishing.

[Vulpecula]

i loved the first chapter, albeit a few spelling errors. the second chapter needs working on, i see. but tone down on the swearing. just because it's GTA doesn't mean you have to swear like crazy!

kudos.

[vonchong115]

What, sorry, I dont' know if it offends anyone. I could write a cleaner version for some of you and the secon chapter is being worked on, thats why its' cra- bad.

[@NDY]

mmmmmm

some people never learn.

how about Carl meets Tommy buy answering a local "Crime Business" paper ad
goes to see him...("interview" (like tommy did with err..fat guy err...Mr Coke ...err...dieazz...person) ...will be interesting!)... just after he gets some media attention from the SAMN (San Andreas Morning News) then he ....................err i donno...........ran out of err....ideas!!!!