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vonchong115    0

Here's a story I started work on a long ----- time ago and after chapter one I just stopped for abgout a month. Well, now that theres some info on SA I want to continue it by Tommy somehow bumping into Carl Jhonson and taking him under his wing. I want to do that in this chapter (2, which isn't complete) but I'm still working out the best way to do:

http://hostultra.com/~gtajunkyard/anewbeginning/

tell me what you think I should do... or just tell me what you think of the story and if you think its' worth finishing.

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Vulpecula    4

i loved the first chapter, albeit a few spelling errors. the second chapter needs working on, i see. but tone down on the swearing. just because it's GTA doesn't mean you have to swear like crazy!

kudos.

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@NDY    0

mmmmmm

some people never learn.

how about Carl meets Tommy buy answering a local "Crime Business" paper ad

goes to see him...("interview" (like tommy did with err..fat guy err...Mr Coke ;) ...err...dieazz...person) ...will be interesting!)... just after he gets some media attention from the SAMN (San Andreas Morning News) then he ....................err i donno...........ran out of err....ideas!!!! :nope:

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