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#21 Alvas.

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Posted 02 July 2010 - 01:47 PM

You helped him him in writing this too. Also, do you already have all the episodes written up or you write them along the time a episode releases ?

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Posted 02 July 2010 - 01:58 PM

You helped him him in writing this too. Also, do you already have all the episodes written up or you write them along the time a episode releases ?

Well when we released episode 1 we allready had about 20 episodes wrote in advance and now we write more episodes as we release these.

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Posted 02 July 2010 - 02:26 PM

Oh...so I will read this new one now(or sometimes later) then.

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Posted 06 July 2010 - 12:42 PM

Alright, peeps, ep. 6! In this one, something will happen to the new guest from the previous episode.



EP. 6 - The Animal




  • *Ace: Understood?
    *Daemon:Oh man! I want a symbiote or whatever that thing is too!
    *Ace: No you don't! If it controls you, you're dead!
    *Daemon: Yo! No one can control DJ!
    *Ace: Forget it! Jet, let's go!
    *Jet: Well, those wheels from the bike sure fit on Hexer.
    *Daemon: Hey, no one turns his back on DJ!
    *Ace: Have a good day!
  • Ace and Jet got on Hexer, and went towards the base.But, on their way, they found some humans controlled by aliens, heading towards them.
    *Ace: Well, I started to miss them!
    *Jet: We're in the middle of the desert, let's finish 'em off! Let's go Flazz!
    *Ace: I won't use my gun in this one.Let's see what I can do without it! Let's go T.B.!
  • Both ran towards the aliens, and started a fight.As Jet was shooting fire bullets and cutting aliens in half with the claws, Ace was simply punching them in the jaw, instantly killing them.A new wave arrived, but, out of nowhere, a black SUV went and hit the aliens.Out of the SUV came Daemon, with an Ingram in his hand.
    *Daemon: Told ya... no one turns his back on DJ! *shoots*
    *Ace: Yeah well since you're here, let's get rid of the aliens! By the way, you got spy qualities, I like that.
    *Jet: But most important, what the fuck are you doing here?
    *Ace: I agree with Jet this time, you're in danger here.
    *Daemon: *shoots* Well... what the... ah! Shit!
  • A guest-less symbiote jumped on Daemon's chest and tried to combine.Ace grabbed two of the aliens, threw them up in the air, and Jet shot them.They then kept fighting the aliens, while Daemon was still fighting with the Vectronian.He was on the ground, rolling and screaming of pain.Ace and Jet were watching him, knowing they can't do anything.After 20 minutes, Daemon finally got up, but not in a zombie-like form, but into a half man half wolf creature.Jet was ready to shoot, but Ace stopped him.
    *Jet: Why you stop me for?
    *Daemon: What the fuck?! Don't shoot! It's me! Daemon!
    *Ace: Because of that! He's still conscious.
    *Jet: Good, 'cause I'm out of bullets!
    *Daemon: What's with me? I'm half man, half beast?
    *Ace: Hmm... try to figure in your mind another animal.
    *Daemon: Okay...
  • Daemon transformed into a lion, then an eagle, and finally a goldfish.He then went back to his human form.
    *Daemon: Yo! That, was, awesome!
    *Ace: Can't believe it, he actually did it.Now your alien should take the shape of your personality.
  • And so, out of a vortex came a cat-like creature.It was Daemon's companion, Sner.
    *Daemon: Hey what's with you 'lil guy?
    *Sner: I'm Sner.Congratulations human, you tamed me, now I'm your companion, following you wherever I can, helping you out, things like that.

    *Daemon: Sner? I'll call you Snoopy!
    *Ace: Err...
    *Tyrobali: Sner? Second Lieutenant of the V-S55 fleet?
    *Sner: That's me! Oh, Tyrobali? General of the V-A01 fleet? Long time no see, mate!
    *Tyrobali: So nice to see you again, mate!
    *Sner: Indeed, very nice!
    *Tyrobali: This is Flazz.Unknown how he got here.
    *Flazz: Meh... nice to meet ya.
    *Sner: Pleasure's all mine!
    *Ace: Okay, so Daemon, it looks like your power is shape-shifting.It's nice.So, you're going to join us? I need a babysitter for Jet.Plus that you get your own room, three meals per day, and you can also annoy Jet to hell.

    *Daemon: Haha! Of course I'll join!
    *Jet: Cool...
    *Ace: Now... *takes out syringe* We need to eliminate that chip inside you, Sner.
    *Sner: Understood.
    *Daemon: What? Ouch!
    *Ace: Don't cry!
  • Ace inserted Daemon's blood into Sner's body, making the chip melt and disappear.
    *Jet: Now, let's go already!
  • Jet got on his Hexer, while Ace and Daemon took the SUV.Then they headed towards the base.
  • Once there, Ace went at the hidden door, and typed in the password.
    *Ace: Remember the password! It's: 'Nesquik'.
    *Daemon: Cereals.Understood.Why 'Nesquik' anyway?
    *Jet: Shut up and go in!
  • They took the elevator and went underground.There, they met with Sam who was waiting for them, and the base was fully decorated.
    *Ace: That's a surprise!
    *Sam: Sweet, right? We got a huge kitchen over to the right, dorms are on the hallway, living room is pretty big as well, and of course, the bathroom, is down the hallway.The bathroom also has a flat screen TV, and many more.

    *Daemon: Yo! Flat screen on the toilet! How crazy is that?! And pretty cool!
    *Sam: I guess you're new around here.My name's Sam.I'm the brain behind this base, and Jet.
    *Jet: What the?!
    *Daemon: Haha! Name's Daemon!
    *Sam: Did you park your vehicles in the hangar?
    *Daemon: Yeah.Why asking?
    *Sam: Enough to know.I'm going to work.Why don't you try the training room?
    *Jet: Oh we got a training room? How cool is that?!
  • While Sam locked himself in the lab, the rest went in the training room.After two hours, Sam came out of his lab, and so did the guys from the training room.
    *Jet: Hey! What the... why'd ya mounted lasers for?! Tryin' to kill me?!
    *Sam: Well you're fighting aliens! What you wanna train with? Dummies?!
    *Ace: I think you went over the edge Sam, we nearly got owned there...
    *Daemon: Shit! I never had this kinda fun in my life!
    *Sam: At least someone likes my creation.
    *Ace: So why'd ya lock up in the lab for?
    *Sam: Come and see.
  • In the lab, Daemon saw his SUV and Jet saw his Hexer, but with some things changed at them.
    *Daemon: Whoa! My ride! It's... what the hell is it doing here?
    *Jet: Sam, how'd ya get these here?
    *Sam: The hangar is also a lift.It leads straight here.Of course, I have security inside the lift.One alien creature, and the laser beams will take care of it.
    *Ace: So what did you do with them?
    *Sam: Look at the Hexer! It has a platinum armor, enforced with extra diamond armor.And, for people not to know it's diamond, it's painted black, like a usual bike.Also, the tires are invulnerable.
    *Daemon: Yo! And my ride?

    *Sam: Also enforced with a bullet proof, explosion proof, damage proof, fire proof, candy proof and other proof armor.Tires invulnerable also, added a better steering, you can accelerate to 400 km/h, also added NOS.Also, the lights are bright when day time, and can blind you on night time.
    *Daemon: Candy proof? Yo, I wanna eat candy inside it!
    *Ace: Anyway... Sam, 2 hours were worth it.
    *Sam: Haha, no.Actually, this took me 30 minutes to enforce the vehicles.In the other hour and a half, I was creating, this!
    *Ace: What's that?
    *Sam: It's a super computer that can locate Vectronian hives.I needed Sner and Tyrobali for this.
    *Flazz: No wonder they were missing... why them anyway?

    *Sner: You share your IQ with a broccoli.
    *Jet: So how does it work?
    *Sam: It works as a GPS.It locates the hive, and you go there and destroy it.
    *Daemon: Yo, there are even hives on Earth?
    *Sner: Unfortunately.
    *Sam: Also, Daemon.I got a weapon for you.It's a pair of claws, sharp and deadly.Just press the button on the thumb, and you can use them.Press it again, and you'll put it away.
    *Daemon: Whoa! Awesome!
  • Suddenly, the computer started to beep.
    *Sam: Looks like we found something! There's a Hive in Arizona! Hurry!
    *Daemon: Oh yeah! First official mission! Let's go team!
    *Jet: Calm down...
    *Ace: Wait... how are you sure it's a hive anyway?
    *Tyrobali: What, you think we're dumb?
    *Ace: Err... so, you know the exact coordinates Sam?
    *Sam: Not really.Just get on Hexer and call me if something happens.
    *Jet: A'ight, let's go!
  • Jet and Daemon got on Hexer, and with Ace in the sky, they went towards the state of Arizona.


...To be continued


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Hope you enjoyed it!

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NEXT EPISODE: 09/07/2010
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Posted 08 July 2010 - 11:43 AM

You should stop this!
I mean releasing a new episode every 3-4 days doesn't even give the readers some time. After you release an episode, wait for around a week. That way, the readers will get time to read it and you will get time to improve each episode too. :)

Anyway, I enjoyed both the episodes. They kept me tuned in..till the end. :)

Edited by Alvas., 08 July 2010 - 01:15 PM.

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Posted 08 July 2010 - 04:51 PM

Hey Alvas, I thought of that too, but Vlad says, and I quote: "'till we release all the episodes, we'll have grandchildren".Yet, I'm going to talk to him about this.Cheers!
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Posted 09 July 2010 - 07:29 AM

To Alvas:all the respect to u for reading the episodes...thank u for that.About releasing 1 episode each week...we plan on having 30-50 episodes of season 1 and after that another 2 seasons scheduled....so lets do the math...30 episodes x 3=90 episodes.One each week=90 weeks....alot of time...and if we're gonna have 40-50 episodes each season its gonna take even longer.I hope u understand now why we release 2 per week.
Once again thank u for taking the time to read.

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Posted 09 July 2010 - 07:38 AM

Oh! Sorry for it then, you can do what you are doing now.
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Or you can write all the episodes, compile it into a book and sell it on the net or maybe make it free if you guys want. :)
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Posted 09 July 2010 - 08:08 AM

Speaking of a book, I should check how long is the entire story so far, in pages.Gonn` have to download something tho.
Later on today releasing a new episode.Also, I wish I knew everyone who reads this story. ;)

EDIT: To avoid a double post, I'll add the episode here.

So, in this episode, the team decides to launch an attack over an alien hive in Phoenix, Arizona.Read to find out what's gonna happen. ;)

This was a tough one to edit, also to write.


  • EP. 7 - The Hunting





  • Previously, on Ace of Spades...
    *Daemon: I want a symbiote of that, or whatever it is.
    *Ace: No you don't! If it controls you, you're dead!
    ...
    *Jet: Why you stop me for?
    *Daemon: What the fuck?! Don't shoot! It's me! Daemon!
    *Ace: Because of that! He's still conscious.
    ...
    *Daemon: Awesome!
    *Sam: I guess you're new around here.My name's Sam.I'm the brain behind this base, and Jet.
    *Jet: What the?!
    ...
    *Sam: I got a weapon for you.It's a pair of claws, sharp and deadly.Just press the button on the thumb, and you can use them.Press it again, and you'll put it away.
    *Daemon: Whoa! Awesome!
    ...
    *Sam: Looks like we found something! There's a Hive in Arizona! Hurry!
    *Ace: You know the exact coordinates Sam?
    *Sam: Not really.Just get on Hexer and call me if something happens.
    ...
  • The team arrived in the state of Arizona, but problem was, they had no idea where they were located.On their way, Jet bought some hot dogs and, unfortunately for him, side effects took place.
    *Ace: Sigh... Sam, where the hell are we?
    *Daemon: I didn't sign in to be lost in a desert!
    *Ace: Sam... today!
    *Sam(Radio): Wow, I can't believe Ricardo is going to dump her...
    *Ace: Sam!
    *Sam(Radio): Whoa! *crash*
    *Ace: *facepalm* Moron...
    *Sam(Radio): Sorry Ace, I was just err... never mind so, what were you saying?

    *Ace: Where are we?!
    *Sam(Radio): Well why don't you see for yourself?
    *Ace: The only fuckin' thing I see is sand!
    *Sam(Radio): No, not that! Check the GPS!
    *Ace: What GPS?!
    *Sam(Radio): The one mounted on Hexer?
    *Ace: And why didn't you say anything from the damn start?!
    *Sam(Radio): I thought you could find it out yourself.Check Hexer.There's a green button, right?
    *Ace: Yeah... should I press it?
    *Sam(Radio): Do it.
  • As Ace pressed the button, out of nowhere, a holographic map appeared right before them.
    *Sam(Radio): The green triangle is your position.I've seen you on my computer all the time, I thought you'd figure it out with the GPS.Also I wanted to see how much you were interested that I spent hours fixing the Hexer.
    *Ace: Thank you, Sam... listen.In the kitchen there's a sink.Press the button on the faucet, and some water will flow on some dirty dishes.That means you have to wash the dishes.Move it!
    *Daemon: Hahaha!
    *Jet: I'm back! I feel sorry for that bush.
    *Daemon: And I told ya, man! Those hot dogs weren't looking so good!

    *Jet: Next time, I'll believe ya!
    *Daemon: Next time I'll make sure I won't transform in a dog, so I can't smell that shit of yours!
    *Jet: So where we heading to?
    *Ace: Check the GPS, genius!
    *Jet: What GPS? Oh, that GPS! Hmm... it's a little down south...
    *Ace: Down south... means it's close to Phoenix.
    *Daemon: Dawg, it's right in the heart of Phoenix!
    *Ace: Bad sign, you know what that means...
    *Jet: Yeah! Public toilets!
    *Daemon&Ace: *facepalm* God!
    *Ace: We're on Road 64, we got some riding to do.We'll stop by in Flagstaff, maybe there's a gas station there.
  • They went back on the road, and as they got in Flagstaff, they refilled Hexer, and went towards Phoenix.On their way, Tyrobali, Flazz and Sner started to act weird.
    *Tyrobali: Hm...
    *Ace: What's wrong?
    *Sner: Eh...
    *Daemon: Something wrong, Snoopy?
    *Sner: We're close.
    *Flazz: Yeah, I can sense it, and it's big...
  • They kept going towards Phoenix, stopping from time to time for a toilet break for Jet.They reached Phoenix, went in the city, and noticed it is empty.
    *Ace: Something sure is going on here... no people, no cars...
    *Daemon: Maybe they ran away from Jet's smell!
    *Jet: Watch what yer saying, punk!
    *Daemon: Hey calm down, dawg! Don't need any accidents.You made enough fertilizer for the whole country on our way here.
  • Ace heard a strange noise, and flew up to check it out.He spotted a huge, black sphere in the middle of the city.He shouted at his team mates.
    *Ace: Guys! We got a problem!
    *Jet: You need to go to the toilet?!
    *Ace: No you dumbass! I've spotted a hive! It's pretty big... how the fuck didn't I see it on our way here?!
    *Daemon: Don't worry about it! Let's just get there!
    *Ace: I'll fly! Come on T.B.!
  • Ace flew towards the hive, with Jet and Daemon following him on Hexer from the streets.They reached the hive, which was even bigger than they expected.
    *Jet: Holy sweet mother of God!
    *Daemon: No time to waste! I bet every citizen from the city is kept there! We gotta save em and... Ah!
  • As Daemon tried to go in the hive, he was stopped by an invisible and electric charged force field.The field sent him flying and burning some meters away.
    *Daemon: Ah! Shit!
    *Ace: Damn! We got a problem! Sam! Sam!
    *Sam(Radio): Aah! *dishes breaking* What?! I'm here! I didn't break anything!
    *Ace: Forget this! We gotta get past a force field, any idea how we can get behind it?
    *Sam(Radio): Hmm... one minute... found something! So, they are... invisible.
    *Jet: I knew it!
    *Sam(Radio): Now, seriously... if you wanna get through one, you'll need intense heat and high speed.

    *Ace: That'll be pretty simple.
    *Sam(Radio): If that's all, I'm going back to the dishes I did not break!
    *Ace: Alright, Sam.One more thing.
    *Sam(Radio): Yes?
    *Ace: You're gonna buy some new dishes! Over! So guys, here's the plan: Daemon you'll transform into a gorilla since we need extreme power, be something like King Kong.Jet, you'll be on Hexer, and drive towards the field, while you use your glove to create a burning spear, and in the same time, add some extra speed.I will fly in the opening, and Daemon, you'll transform in a cheetah and get here fast.Understood?!
    *Daemon: Yeah!
    *Jet: Don't ye think ya got a pretty easy task?
    *Ace: Who's the boss. you or me?
    *Jet: Hey, I'll tell you something I didn't tell ya in a while: Fuck you!
  • Daemon transformed into a gorilla, Jet got on Hexer and prepared his glove, and Ace took out his wings and got ready.At his signal, Jet light up his glove, Daemon punched the ground, sending a wave that hit Hexer, making it go with high speed.After, Jet pointed his glove towards the field, creating a large aura of fire, and Hexer's speed increased.As Jet hit the field, the flames sent waves over the rest of the field, and in it, formed a small, but passable opening.Ace flew in it, and Daemon, as a cheetah, speed up inside the hive.He managed to get inside, right before the opening was sealed.
    *Daemon: We did it, man...
    *Ace: We got another problem, though...
    *Jet: Wha... what the... what kinda door is this?
    *Flazz: Damn it's huge!
    *Sner: Pretty tough as well, it would be impossible for you guys to get pass it.You need like, thirty five passwords, each with over sixty numbers and or letters.
    *Ace: Terrible is the way of the aliens.
    *Flazz: Tellin' me...

    *Jet: Any other ideas?
    *Tyrobali: I suggest the sewers?
    *Jet: What... never mind.
    *Ace: Nice one, Toothpaste! Let's go!
    *Tyrobali: You're just lucky I'm getting used with your gimmicks.
  • They removed the manhole, and jumped in the sewers.They went in the direction of the hive, but after just some steps, they arrived at it.They saw a small opening of it, and Daemon used his claws to make it bigger.After the opening was large enough, they went inside, where they found themselves surrounded by Vectronians, this time some never-before seen versions.
    *Ace: What are those?
    *Sner: We can take shapes of creatures, animals usually, but not humans.
    *Jet: Skip the details, I smell some fresh intergalactic goo splattered all over!
    *Daemon: Ain't you readin' my mind, homie!
  • They went on a killing spree, eliminating Vectronian after Vectronian.Out of a sudden, from a door came some scorpion-like creatures.They attacked, and the team also hit them back.Suddenly, one of the scorpions bit Ace's hand, which got blue.Ace then fell down, unconscious.The scorpion that bit him was killed by Jet, who rushed to see Ace's condition.
    *Jet: Ace! Ace!
    *Daemon: Shit! What's with him?!
    *Jet: Ace! T.B., what's wrong?!
    *Tyrobali: His vital signs are pretty weak... it's kinda affecting me too...
    *Daemon: What can we do?
    *Sner: Those scorpions were Elite Squad 6, aka Venom Squad.They inject poison in the victim, which dies in less that twenty four hours.
    *Daemon: Shit! Shit! Who made my buddy so smart?! He should've shut up!
    *Jet: Any way to eliminate the poison? *shoots* These things just keep coming! Sam! Genius! Any idea how to get rid of poison?!

    *Sam(Radio): Maybe, sucking the poison out?
    *Jet: A blowjob?
    *Sam(Radio): No not that way, but it might work.Suck it from the wound!
    *Jet:Easy to say, but sounds like, disgusting.
    *Daemon: Hell, I'm gonna take care of these assholes!
    *Sam(Radio): We need something that can suck out his poison!
    *Jet: What exactly genius?! A toilet pump?!
    *Sam(Radio): A leech!
    *Jet: Where to get a leech?!
    *Sner: Daemon can transform in one!
    *Daemon: Daemon can what, transform in who?!
    *Jet: Daemon! Get transformed into a leech! I'll handle these critters!
  • Daemon transformed into a leech, got on Ace's hand and sucked out his blood from the wound, while spitting it out after.Meanwhile, Jet, with an unusual anger inside him, used the power of his glove to invoke Volcano and Eruption.He then slayed the other aliens, or shooting them.After three hours, Jet finally eliminated all the aliens, and, tired, went to see Ace's condition.
    *Jet: How's Ace?
    *Tyrobali: Ow... still pretty bad...
    *Daemon: Mmm... mmm... *spits* Bleh! Blood type B, most disgusting!
    *Sner: Stop complaining!
    *Daemon: I took out around half of his bodies blood... will he survive anyway after this?
    *Sner: Good point...
    *Daemon: Hmm... I lost that infected taste... I think the poison is gone.
    *Tyrobali: But, his vital signs still are weak... and mine are not better either.
    *Flazz: Just hang on there... what if a miracle happens?
    *Daemon: I guess a miracle is everything that can save Ace...
  • When they thought he was dead for good, as Jet was about to take him on his back, he saw Ace's finger moving.They rushed around him to see his status, and Ace slowly got up.
    *Ace: Wha... my... head... God what happened?!
    *Jet: Ace! Fuckin' asshole! I'm so happy to see ya!
    *Ace: What the... what happened to you?
    *Daemon: Ace! Good you're back man!
    *Ace: Seriously, what happened? I only remember a pain in my hand, then nothing...
    *Tyrobali: You were bitten by a scorpion which injected poison inside you.
    *Ace: Wha... Did I? Then, I'm happy I'm back too!
    *Sam(Radio): I guess you own us thanks.
    *Ace: Yeah, thanks a bunch guys!

    *Jet: Just buy me a beer, and we're even.
    *Daemon: I want a laptop! Bet you can buy one!
    *Sam(Radio): I could use some books, and some candy!
    *Ace: Guys, we're celebrating my revival not Christmas! Let's go on!
    *Sner: I sense intense power in front... we better be vigilante.
    *Ace: Vigilante? I was so vigilante I forgot Hexer!
    *Jet: Oh shit! I'll head back to Hexer! You guys keep going!
    *Daemon: A'ight catch up with us!
  • Ace and Daemon went forward into the base, while Jet went back to Hexer but not through the sewers.He went at the large door, and couldn't find anything that can open it.He went in thoughts for some minutes until he was so mad, he kicked the door, which opened.As he was going out, he noticed Hexer wasn't where it was before.He noticed some Vectronians taking Hexer away from Jet.Angry, Jet charged at the aliens with his weapons, and quickly destroyed some of them, before more came.
  • Meanwhile, Ace and Daemon were still walking around the hive, without any interference from aliens.They reached a fork, and each went in different directions.Ace arrived in a corridor with odd red glowing pipes on the walls.He went forward to check the end.Daemon went on a darker route.Then suddenly, he heard something from behind.He quickly took his Ingram, but before he could even aim, an alien hit him, sending him all over to the end of the hallway, where even more aliens were.
  • Ace was still walking, and reached a door.He examined the door, and without even knowing what he's doing, he touched it, and it opened.He went forward, where he reached a room with capsules, in which the citizen of Arizona were.
    *Ace: What the...
    *???: Amazing you could actually survive that...
    *Ace: What? Who's here?
    *???: Hmm... you'll soon know... for now, I'm your nightmare.Soon, I'll be your death...
    *Ace: Just stop chit-chattin` in the shadows and come face me, will ya?!
    *???: I could just slay you right now, but I need someone that can actually stand against me, at least for a few minutes...
    *Ace: You think I'm not tough?!
    *???: Not yet...
  • From the shadows, Ace noticed a figure, but it turned around and disappeared right when Ace shot at it.
    *???: You'll find out later, who I am...
    *Ace: Meh... I'll wait then...
  • Suddenly, he heard a pain scream in front of him.He ran to check it out, and saw fifteen year old Tyson Murray, tied up in the middle of the room.
    *Ace: Damn, are you alright?!
    *Tyson: Gah... what... oh man, my head...
    *Ace: Hang on there, I'll unlock this.
  • Ace shot the locks, and set Tyson free.Tyson fell on the ground and Ace helped him get up.

    *Ace: What happened?
    *Tyson: Argh... they captured me.I dunno why, but it's like they knew who and why to capture.Me, the whole city and... Sarah... Sarah! Damn!
    *Ace: What? Who's Sarah?
    *Tyson: My elder sister, they captured her too! She's on the second floor if I remember right... if they did something to her, I'm gonna kill them all! Piece of shit aliens!
    *Ace: Whoa, calm down... let's just get going, okay?
    *Tyson: Why should I go with you?! I don't know who you are, and your true cause here!
    *Ace: I'm Acelius, but call me Ace.I'm here to destroy this thing, with some friends.Though, I dunno where they are now.
    *Tyson: Why should I trust you?!
    *Ace: I saved your life, punk! Be thankful! Now get going, or I'll just let you here with ET's brothers!
    *Tyson: Better! I can slay the hell outta them!
    *Ace: With your bare hands?
    *Tyson: Yeah!
    *Ace: They'll just kill you...
    *Tyson: So?
    *Ace: So you won't see your sister again, neither she will see you.
    *Tyson: Meh... you're right.Let's go.
  • But before they could start going, they heard an explosion, and out of the smoke, flew Jet and Hexer, and both hit the wall on the other side.
    *Ace: Jet!
    *Jet: Watch out!
  • As the smoke disappeared, Ace saw a large creature with tentacles, who was approaching them.
    *Ace: Sushi?
    *Jet: Funny...
    *Ace: Sarcasm.Where's Daemon?!
    *Daemon: Right here!
  • Daemon was on the creature, stabbing it with his claws.A tentacle grabbed Daemon, and threw him towards the guys.Ace took his wings out, and flew towards Daemon, grabbing him and landing down on the floor.
    *Ace: Any ideas?
    *Jet: I got one... but it'll be a bit risky...
    *Ace: No Armageddon!
    *Jet: Then I'm out of ideas.
    *Ace: Just attack!
  • The three attacked the monster, who was also fighting back.Suddenly, Tyson noticed something at the monster.In one of his tentacles was a woman, twenty three year old Sarah Murray, Tyson's elder sister.

    *Tyson: Sis! Ace! My sister is at the monster!
    *Ace: What?! I see her! Guys, we gotta save that girl!
  • Jet got on Hexer and speed towards the monster, going on a tentacle and reaching its eye, where he took his shotgun, loaded it with flames from the glove, and shot the monster in the eye, making it lose balance, and releasing Sarah, in mid air.Ace flew and saved Sarah, and when Jet got down with Hexer, Daemon transformed into a dinosaur, and bit the monster of his tentacles.Full of blood, the monster fell down on the ground, and Ace loaded his gun with Tyrobali's power, and destroyed the creature's head.
  • They then gathered around in a spot in the middle of the room.

    *Tyson: Sarah!
    *Sarah: Hmm... Tyson? What happened!
    *Tyson: Oh man, sis! Good you're okay!
    *Sarah: What happened? Who are you all?
    *Ace: Name's Acelius, for short Ace, leader of this group of alien-slayers.
    *Jet: Who died and made you leader?!
    *Ace: Shut up and present yourself idiot!
    *Daemon: I'm Daemon, nice to meet ya.
    *Jet: Jet, and... whoa girl, are those real?
    *Sarah: Pervert! *slap*
    *Jet: Ow!
    *Ace: Wow, didn't he deserve that! Haha!
    *Daemon: Sure did, so what happened to you?
    *Sarah: Well... we were attacked by these things.A black thing fell from the sky, and landed down in the middle of the city.
    *Tyrobali: I thought they'll attack on 22nd December 2012... why so soon?

    *Sarah: Ah! What's that?!
    *Ace: Just our intergalactic companions!
    *Flazz: Three of a kind! Name's Flazz!
    *Sner: My name is Sner.
    *Daemon: Aka Snoopy! Hehe!
    *Sner: That works too.
    *Tyrobali: I'm Tyrobali, nice to meet you.
    *Tyson: How cool is that...
    *Sarah: And scary...
    *Flazz: Oh come on now, why so afraid?
    *Sarah: I dunno, maybe...
    *Ace: Watch out!
  • A black ray hit the group, sending them in different directions.Ace managed to get up, but noticed the rest were out cold.
    *???: It's time to meet me, is it...
    *Ace: So you're...
    *???: Here... I am indeed...
    *Ace: Where are you?!
    *???: Right next to your new friend...
    *Ace: Wha... Tyson... damn...
  • He noticed the same black figure next to Tyson, which grabbed him.The figure, with Tyson in his hands, stepped forward, and revealed his face.It was a man dressed in a black shirt and coat, black pants, boots and hat, and with a mask on his face.

    *Ace: Who are you?!
    *???: I am Drake Morrison.Just like you, I tamed my Vectronian, but followed the way of Vectron.I'm here to conquer for them, as commander of the elite fleet.
    *Ace: Damn... why would you want to go with them when they try to destroy Earth?!
    *Drake: Humans are indeed as they say, pathetic.They don't deserve to exist in the universe!
    *Ace: You are a human!
    *Drake: Not anymore! We are both strong, Ace... we should join our forces and destroy Earth!
    *Ace: Fuck me up first!

    *Drake: Listen to me... we're the same...
    *Ace: He looks almost like me... what is this?
    *Drake: Indeed, I'm also surprised we look nearly the same, but maybe our friends know each other? Right, Reploz?
    *Reploz: Hehe, I can see who your friend is, Acelius Connor... you can come forward, Tyrobali, general of V-A01 fleet.
    *Tyrobali: Reploz, general of E-226 elite fleet... what brings you here?
    *Reploz: Only the wish to conquer the world.We were programmed to hit Earth on 22nd December of 2012.But I decided it should start now, slowly, and maybe, until 22nd December, Earth will be destroyed for good.
    *Ace: I'll give you a hint! You'll never destroy Earth!
    *Drake: I have planed this attack for months.I planned it before the high ranks of Vectron did.Anyway, the fate of Earth is to be seen, hero.But I assure you, there will be only one winner.Until then, we will meet again soon.And, I was about to forget about your little friend...
  • Drake threw Tyson, who landed in a cylinder filled with a greed liquid.As the cylinder's glass shattered, Tyson landed on some high voltage cables, which shocked him.Tyson screamed loudly, and Ace was paralyzed by this accident.
    *Ace: Monster...
    *Drake: Indeed... I am...
    *Ace: He's just a kid...
    *Drake: When we take over, no child, no adult, not even elders will survive...
    *Ace: Right now, after what you've done... I don't really give a damn... I just wanna kick your ass outta this planet...
    *Drake: Hmm...
    *Ace: Prepare... to face the Ace of Spades!
  • Suddenly, a card appeared right above Ace, which was going slowly down.Ace grabbed the card, and showed it to Drake, revealing an ace of spades.Then, the card became a small bright light, and combined with Ace's gun, and so did Tyrobali.Then it was time for the showdown.

... To be continued


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Posted 09 July 2010 - 11:51 AM

..Or you could make a book for each season.

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Posted 10 July 2010 - 02:29 PM

We CAN make books, but the way we saw this, we thought this is better for a movie or an anime series.Just like Samuel L. Jackson's 'Afro Samurai'.We also thought this would be cool in a video game. ;) Something close to Devil May Cry, and other, you start with Ace and then you can play with other unlocked characters after several missions.Always thought the game would start perfect with Ace's memories, then a cutscene on the ship, and finally the meeting between Ace and T.B., Jet, Daemon and other minor and major characters.
Also, you get to customize characters. :D

Though, if we ever succeed with this story, either in a book or on TV, hope one day, R* will come and knock at my door and ask me to borrow the ideas of 'Ace of Spades' for a new game[GTA V?]
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[NOTE: Especially chosen R* since their games are like totally violent and filled with blood and gore, mild language, other stuff that goes with the series]
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Posted 10 July 2010 - 06:11 PM

Actually i was thinking of an MMORPG...you know something with customizable characters,customizable powers etc,the main characters of the books would be npc's,u could have quests,fight vectronians and all that.I think it would make a pretty good game.

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Posted 10 July 2010 - 06:44 PM

Damn man, we gotta discuss about this.First of, the idea of a MMO isn't bad at all.Indeed, your ideas are cool, and it could be even more cool if it had high graphics, a large world to discover, good effects like shadows, water, explosions if needed, and of course, PVP.
Still, I don't like MMOs.It's not because I can't play Mabinogi... or Runescape... okay can't play anything I dunno why [only Metin 2, but never]
Yet, as I said, who knows if someone will actually make a game after this.

Until then tho, we'll keep posting episodes here.Hope you all enjoy it.May not be perfect [sure is better than my old ones lol] but we're giving all we can.

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Posted 11 July 2010 - 11:02 AM

Where all other than TGTAP are you publishing it ?
Since keeping it closed here, will reduce the speed in which you get recognition.
deviantART might be good idea.

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Posted 11 July 2010 - 11:06 AM

Well,we decided to start by posting the story here,since Samil has been on these forums for a pretty long time and knows how things go around here.And if the readers like our story,we are going to start posting it in some other places too.

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Posted 11 July 2010 - 11:10 AM

Indeed, posted here because this is where I have people I can trust.Of course, as Vlad said, if the readers like it, maybe we'll post it on other websites as well.
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Posted 11 July 2010 - 11:22 AM

Yup.Exactly what I meant to say. Go on...

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Posted 13 July 2010 - 10:47 AM

Dear readers, the next episode will delay a bit, but it will be worth it.We will add some special artwork in it.Each pic, drawn by hand by a friend, will illustrate some moments of the episode.
Post will be edited when story is uploaded.

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EDIT: Okay peeps, this is Episode 8.In the previous episode, Ace's team met a new enemy, Drake.What will happen to them in this episode? Read to find out!

Also, this is our first episode to have illustrations.Even tho they are not perfect, they were made in a hurry, I want to thank my friend, Lorena Cornea, for wasting her time to make this.And it's really good I say.Just note that I think you will have to click on it to enlarge. ^^




  • EP. 8 - The Thunder




  • Previously, on Ace of Spades...
    *Ace: Down south... means it's close to Phoenix.
    *Daemon: Dawg, it's right in the heart of Phoenix!
    ...
    *Tyrobali: His vital signs are pretty weak... it's kinda affecting me too...
    *Daemon: What can we do?
    *Sner: Those scorpions were Elite Squad 6, aka Venom Squad.They inject poison in the victim, which dies in less that twenty four hours.
    ...
    *Ace: What the...
    *???: Amazing you could actually survive that...
    *Ace: What? Who's here?
    *???: I am Drake Morrison.
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    ...
    *Ace: Damn, are you alright?!
    *Tyson: Gah... what... oh man, my head...
    ...
    *Sarah: What happened? Who are you all?
    *Ace: Name's Acelius, for short Ace, leader of this group of alien-slayers.
    ...
    *Ace: He's just a kid...
    *Drake: When we take over, no child, no adult, not even elders will survive...
    *Ace: Prepare... to face the Ace of Spades!
    ...
  • With the gun loaded with energy, Ace aimed at Drake, who was calmly watching him.Ace fired his gun, sending a large beam of light towards Drake, however Drake managed to avoid it.As the beam went pass him, it split up in other smaller beams, who turned towards Drake, this time hitting him from all sides.Drake felt down for a second, and got back up.
    *Drake: Not bad...
    *Reploz: The kid's got some talent.
    *Ace: I don't give a shit... I only wanna fuck you up!
  • And Ace started shooting again, but Drake successfully dodged all the shots.
    *Drake: Losing your talent? Is that really all you can do?! What have you done so many years in the Mafia? Delivering cookies?
    *Ace: How do you know I was working for the Mafia?!
    *Drake: I know everything about you, Ace... your past, your present, and of course, your future! Also, I know the most important thing for you, from your past.
    *Ace: What?! What do you know of my past or future?! My past is destroyed, so it's time to make my future with my own hands!
    *Drake: Your future is that... you'll end up in Hell!
  • As he finished his sentence, Drake charged at Ace.He grabbed him with his left hand.He then took his right hand, which was surrounded by a dark aura, he grabbed Ace of his neck, and chocked him.
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    *Drake: You piss me off...
    *Ace: Eh?!
    *Drake: This is something I've learned from my companion.
  • Drake's eyes started glowing red, and from his hand came a dark mist, who surrounded Ace.
    *Tyrobali: Ace... I know that look! The same Reploz had when he was killing... he had no mercy.He never hesitated to kill.Even Vectron wasn't safe with him.

    *Ace: What's... happening?
    *Tyrobali: He's sending his energy inside you! If that's done, we're both... dead...
    *Reploz: Don't forget, Tyrobali... this is what we do to rebels, and to everyone who dares to help them.
    *Ace: Shit... aargh!
    *Tyrobali: Can't resist any more!
  • As he said that, Tyrobali turned into liquid again, falling down on the ground.
    *Drake: Savor your last moments... Argh! Who dares?!
  • Drake was hit by a lightning bolt, and as he turned around, he saw Tyson, with yellow glowing eyes, and an angry look.
    *Tyson: I do...
    *Drake: So our little friend is still alive?
    *Tyson: I have no idea what you've done to me, I have no idea why.Got no idea what was in that cylinder, neither why I'm still alive... but as I regained my consciousness, I noticed I have these powers.I'd thank you, but I won't!
    *Drake: I brought you here because of a friend's request...
  • Then Tyson started sending lightning bolts towards Drake, who this time was hardly avoiding them, and actually getting hit some times.As Tyson was busy with Drake, Ace had enough time to get up, and recombine with Tyrobali.They then watched the fight between Tyson and Drake.After a while, Drake regained his horrifying calm, and started blocking his attacks with his hand.But suddenly, as he blocked another attack, a small charge was sent through Drake's hand, into his body, shocking him and making him yell in pain.Back at Ace and Tyrobali, Ace contacted Sam.
    *Ace: Sam! Answer, Sam!
    *Sam(Radio): Ace! What happened? I couldn't contact you at all, what happened?!
    *Ace: Sam! Is it possible for someone to get electrical powers all of a sudden without having a symbiote?!
    *Sam(Radio): Well it sounds a bit like... comic books.But for you guys, everything is possible.
    *Ace: Damn... asking what happened?
    *Sam(Radio): Yeah, I'm curious!
    *Ace: Well I'll only say that, we're in dipshit! And... Sam! Sam! Damn!
    *Drake: I could use someone like you in my team... and the offer is still available for you too, Ace.But, you're not 100% ready, so I'll let you, for now.Au revoir!
  • Before Tyson or Ace could do something, Drake took out some metal wings, and flew up, turning into a shadow ball and disappearing.As it ended, Tyson ran to check on his sister, and Ace to check Jet and Daemon.Sarah got up, being a bit dizzy, and so did Jet and Daemon.They gathered in a place, and discussed a while.
    *Sarah: What happened?
    *Ace: You were hit by Drake, and fell unconscious.
    *Jet: Wait? Who's Drake?! Your new imaginary friend?
    *Ace: Idiot! He nearly killed all of us!
    *Daemon: I dunno, I was attacked as I was heading through that corridor.Then I landed in the same room with Jet, and were attacked by that octopus thing, with the girl in his arms... err, tentacles.
    *Jet: Yeah, they stole Hexer, I chased them, and then started an assault.Then landed where you saw me.
    *Tyson: Right, whatever, now what can we do with everyone in these capsules?!
    *Ace: Well the base is clear, so I guess we can carry them outside.
  • After some hours, they took every capsule at circa one kilometer away from the hive.
    *Jet: Now, to get rid of the base...
    *Ace: Are you gonna use it?
    *Jet: What? I wasn't thinking at anything!
    *Ace: *facepalm* Idiot... just use Armageddon!
    *Jet: Oh yeah, sure!
  • Jet used his Armageddon move, and as his gloved turned red, a bright red sphere appeared right above the hive, and out of it fell meteors, fully hitting the hive, and making it collapse.As the hive was destroyed, and with it, a bit of the surrounding buildings, Ace contacted Sam again.

    *Ace: Sam, we need help again! We took the capsules with the people, but it seems impossible to take them out!
    *Sam(Radio): Err... this is a tough one.Okay use, explosives?
    *Ace: Oh good idea, thanks Sam!
    *Sam(Radio):Really? I mean, you're welcome!
    *Ace: Over! Okay, listen, Jet, give me a shotgun shell!
    *Jet: Why for?
    *Ace: Stop asking stupid questions!
    *Jet: Idiot! Here's your shell!
    *Ace: Okay... *places on capsule* Placed it on the door, if that's a door... stand back! Now Tyson, send a lightning towards the shell.

    *Tyson: Alright! *fires* Whoa! Damn, that's an explosion!
    *Ace: Well it opened!
    *Jet: I'll take him out! *takes man* Oh, man, he's heavy as fuck!
    *Ace: Place him over there!
    *Jet: Okay, down with ya, fatso! *drops man* Oh, my back!
    *Ace: Now what?
    *Sam(Radio): I can help you here!
    *Ace: Sam? How exactly?
    *Sam(Radio): Well I can't actually believe you didn't see me!
    *Ace: Wha... *looks around* Yeah, you ain't here!

    *Sam(Radio): Above you!
    *Ace: Oh... *looks above* Oh, hey Sam!
    *Sam: Hey, like my new ride?
    *Daemon: Oh yeah, it's hot!
    *Sam: Hey catch this! *throws box*
    *Daemon: I got it! *box falls on head* Oh, momma! *falls down*
    *Sarah: Oh, boys... *takes box* What are these?
    *Sam: Err... who are... oh, hey there pretty lady!
    *Ace: Cut it out, Sam! What are these anyway?!
    *Sam: Bombs, isn't it obvious? Just place them on the capsules.
    *Jet: There goes another hour of my life.
  • Sam landed his ship nearby, and everyone placed bombs on the capsules.They then took a distance, and detonated them all.
    *Ace: Damn... those were like... thirty thousand and something bombs, for each civilain...
    *Sam: Should've made a bigger one...
    *Tyson: That can blow us all up?
    *Sam: Good point, kid!
    *Jet: Gah... so this is done, let's go!
    *Tyson: Wait, I wanna go with you guys too!
    *Daemon: Tyson, just stay here with your sis!
    *Tyson: Come on I wanna come too!
    *Sarah: Tyson! Look, thanks for saving us but, time to get back to our normal lives.
    *Ace: I understand.See you then!

    *Tyson: Wait! I really wanna go with you! I wanna help you! You saw how I faced that guy?! I can be useful!
    *Ace: Hmm... indeed he is strong.
    *Jet: Ace, he's a kid... you wouldn't wanna involve someone like him in this.
    *Ace: True but...
    *Tyson: Come on!
    *Sarah: Tyson!
    *Daemon: Damn!
    *Ace: With one condition!
    *Tyson: Alright, anything!
    *Ace: We need your sister too, to look over you!

    *Sam: Oh I like this idea!
    *Sarah: I don't! Come on Tyson!
    *Tyson: Come on Sarah!
    *Sarah: No!
    *Tyson: Life is useless anyway! Mom is dead, dad is dead! Why struggle?
    *Ace: Hmm... you know, where we are you can get a free room, and food.It's pretty nice there.
    *Sarah: Tyson...
    *Tyson: Come on sis...
    *Sarah: Okay... let's go.
    *Tyson: Thanks! *hugs*
    *Daemon: Brother love, so nice.
    *Sam: Let's go before every civilian regains consciousness!
  • They all got on the ship, but having some problems with Hexer who wouldn't want to start.After it did, Jet parked it on the ship, and when the ship's backdoor closed, with high speed, they went back to the airfield in California.


... To be continued

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NEXT EPISODE: 16/07/2010


I also hope you liked Lorena's artwork! By that, she's part of the team now, so credit to her too. :)
I will not only credit her, but also make her a 'special guest' [well maybe the name only, modified a bit ^^]

Okay so, forgot to add this: An even cooler artwork of Acelius, this is also the best made so far. :)
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Posted 13 July 2010 - 05:10 PM

Yay. You finally posted them <3.

I like the story so far, good job you guys <3 !

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Posted 13 July 2010 - 05:12 PM

Cheers, Lore! ^^
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