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#1 Silberio

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Posted 18 February 2010 - 07:02 PM

Howdy.

Well, first of all, I was thinkin on naming the topic "*FREE BEER*" to get more attention, but whatever.

After that stinkin' low grade joke, I would like to post some of my poetry, or something like that.
Y'know, I ussually write my Verses and poetry in spanish, so those little piece's are kind of... mediocre' (If that's the word).

Anyway, here it is:

This is what's called "Free Poetry" AFAIK, as that kind of writing doesnt need to follow classical poetry rules.

You are everything
28/01/2010

Where can I go?
I just love you
You know it is true
So, where can I go?
Nowhere
Just leave me here
I am the one who’s gone
I am the on who loves you
Just don’t le it be a broken hearth
Tell me, who’s gone?
Yeah, I know it’s me
Nevertheless, it could be you
For without you, I don’t exist
And without myself, I‘m me gone
However, without me, you aren’t anymore
For I can’t think on you
You are me and I am you
We need each other
Like the river needs its water
Like the bird needs the sky

Like eagle needs its eyes
You are mine
I am yours
Like the tree needs someone’s view
For the trees sing when you walk
And they sing for you
For your happiness
For you are a virgin
For me, my princess
The time in my space
The eyes of my soul
The light in my wine
Fire
Everything
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This shit... *Ahemm*, this "writing" is closer to classical poetry-

There is no way out
There is no one around
You love is biting me right now
There is no one around

I am on my own
I need your love
Girl, tell me now
I'm gone

I am gone forever
Gone For nighttime while
Have fun for my time
Going to come back? Never

I have the will
However, you get me twice
Girl, I love you
I got the will

I am all yours
Just to tell me
I will get through
Just tell me

‘Cause I need you
Love me
Listen to me
Love me

Just gone with the wind
And the sea sparkling’ your name
The rain tasting your lips
Feeling your hips

Smile this day, because I am gone
Away, away, away
I am taking my way
If you follow me, I turn alone

I get back to your hearth
And on to my dreams
You are my rose
I am your thorn

You are part of me
And I am part of you
‘Cause I love you
‘Cause you’ll love me


Don’t bring me down
Don’t take me out
Sweet girl, your mine
Let me get down your line
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Now this... this is a song I wrote in 4/4, key of E with a slight Country tempo.


Look, around yourself, don’t you feel alone?
Well, I do, but I am on my own
And I don’t know how I make it through
All the day long with my blues


True love will never die
That’s why I can’t forget you, even if I try
For you are my only love
Don’t leave me wounded, all alone

‘Cause even if the morning was cold
Or I was running through the storm
I would always see you again
I never had to wait

But now, you’re farther away from me
Even though its just a few blocks away
Who’s smile am I going to see?
Every morning, day after day

Yeah, it seems so easy for everyone
Having what they want and need all the time
But I have to stay alone in the tide
And I guess I wont fall in love anymore

Getting your love seems so hard
But Jesus walked on the water one day
Sometimes I think my hearth will tear apart
And that my soul is going to wither away
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Hope you've liked it, Lord bless ya all, cheers.
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#2 Cool_dude

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Posted 01 March 2010 - 12:32 AM

U rock u got a great talent :thumbsup:




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