Posted 24 August 2008 - 02:45 AM
A suggestion:
Try to stick to using only a couple of colours. Green, blue and red aren't good colours to all use together. Plus, that's on a black and white BG.
Say you've got a light blue BG, don't use red text, use white text with a darker blue border. makes it stand out without looking weird.
Another piece of advice is to think about text placement. Don't stick it over an image, or a particularly 'crowded' part of the image. Put it in it's own place, neatly. Number 3 is a good example of what I'm talking about.
I do very much like the 2nd, though. Crop out say the bottom quarter and i think it would look real nice, add some text in on the right and voila. Also, amke it a bit darker overall..
Anyway, just tips and advice is all. Keep experimenting!

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